I got a lot of really good feedback on my post last week! It was helpful and really steered me towards the right direction. I think I was overly concerned about whether or not I could construct an immersive fantasy world, whether that be the mechanics of the magic that I employ in my writing or in the characters that I make. From what I've been told, I know the genre pretty well and the mechanics of the world aren't nearly as important as the storytelling. What I really need to focus on is how I present the information, provide the back story and push the plot along without putting so much fantasy filler in the mix. I think that developing good writing habits and syntax will come with practice and I can put in my details after the fact.
On that note, I'm going to start pushing more content, specifically on this blog. It is going to be weekly stories, poems, and other writing prompts and miscellaneous things. If you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them! Thanks again for the feedback, I hope you guys stick around for more.